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旧 Jul 12th, 2007, 11:32     #1801
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这个问题比较严重压～



前几天我写了个关于故事结尾的梗概，发给各位帮我斟酌压下～


我是这样写的：



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江湖上的一众少年才俊在老Z老无的帮助下擒了东鞋狗狗～
为了让狗狗交出...
好像是有点LM

哈哈，无意坐了个1800的沙发
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