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旧 Oct 24th, 2012, 20:50     #40
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狂风聚雪地上灰,
人人横走冷尖锥;
车飘腾云过高桥,
莫笑压重需增肥。
这个有意思,

斗胆说一句,第三句最后一字一定不能是平声字,因为你押的是平声字的韵。
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