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缘生缘灭平常事

祸起祸消塞上人


总统讲解:

原句:缘生缘灭本平常。平仄是这样的:平平平仄仄平平。作为上联,句尾一般应该是仄声。而且读起来也不上口。所以我改为了 平平平仄平平仄

下句代入典。当然大家都知道是《淮南子》的塞翁失马。平仄为:仄仄仄平仄仄平



每句的后...
受教受教,多谢总统费心讲解。后四个字确实很费思量啊。

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