Mar 18th, 2010, 01:37
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【转帖】给小三的信
在网上看到这个，我个人感觉这个女人写下这些文字的时候，是充满痛苦愤恨的。估计是控制不住， 写了这封给小三的信。 其实我不是太欣赏她的做法，大家呢？ Dear friends, After 13 years and 2 beautiful children together, Yale and I have parted our ways. Yale moved out last week. Dear Diane/Tao Dan Yang, Over the past couple of years, you knew everything about my family. You knew when my kids had their soccer tournaments, you knew when they had their swimming practices. You even knew their baby nicknames. On December 18th, 2009, on a noon flight, I took my children to the U.S. for Christmas vacation. On the very same day, December 18th, 2009, on an afternoon flight, you and Yale took off for the beaches of Phuket and shopping streets of Bangkok for Christmas vacation. Diane, as a fellow woman, I often wondered if the level of ecstasy this vacation had brought you equates to the level of devastation this vacation had brought to my children and me. Diane, I often asked myself what was it like for you to sleep in the arms of another woman's husband, other children's father? I wondered if you ever thought about us, the children and the wife, that we are made of flesh and blood, that we have feelings, that we could get hurt, very hurt, devastatingly hurt. I pondered if you knew you were destroying a family, if you knew your joy would bring endless tears to us. We went to Beijing last week for Chinese New Year. Your clothes were in our Beijing home. My son screamed:" Mommy, don't touch those, they are disgusting! Set them on fire, burn them to hell. They are the devil's cloth!" My children are hurt. My daughter, 9 years old, now says "Mommy, I don't ever want to get married." My son, 8 years old, says "Diane is our Voldemort!" The psychological damage this affair has done to my children is catastrophic. They are forever emotionally damaged. With this, I announce you the winner. How do I feel, Diane? This affair is like 10 thousand knives stabbing and chopping my heart all at once. This affair has left me in so much pain that I don't know how to heal myself. This affair has taught me tear supply can actually be infinite. This affair has crushed me, leaving me a corpse walking around with no heart. I don't know how to deal with this kind of pain. I don't know how to move on. But I have children. I must move on. Diane, I pray to God that you will never have to experience this kind of betrayal and hurt. I wish you and Yale a happy life together because, after all, we are all women and we all deserve to be happy. With sincere regards, Lily |
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Mar 26th, 2010, 11:57
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这封信写得实在是太差了。 整封信的TONE都不对，读起来像在倾诉。 用词不自然，句子很长，忸怩作态。 谴责人的话是越简明扼要越有力，罗哩罗嗦的说了那么多，分散了注意力。 而且不断呼唤对方的名字，真不可思议。 当一个人嘴里叫对方的名字（特别是first name）的时候，那是为了拉近和对方的距离，给人产生亲近的感觉。 虽然不一定要用BITCH， 起码要用YOU 来代替，为了表示鄙视和藐视对方，要不屑提她的名字才对. 开头还套公式来个 DEAR？:  晕倒引用:
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Mar 26th, 2010, 16:45
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小时候我们上课,我坐前桌,他做后桌,上课时候还传纸条写诗呢.. 我估计找找还能找着,写在我一黑皮本子的夹缝里. 太好玩了... 呵呵 |
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看得出女主人非常愤怒
