Sep 20th, 2009, 16:05 | #1 |
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改诗大赛
一美女写下如下诗句:咏秋 秋叶落黄暗伤神,秋雨滴落颤凉意,秋风萧稀惹深寒,秋日斜阳洒满身 老夫感觉其意境犹佳,只是韵律皆无,实在看不过去,改成如下: 秋叶飞黄暗伤神,秋雨斜落满院深,秋风萧稀惹冬至,秋日艳阳裹满身。 现征集华风散淡人士共商改诗大计,有胜出者二锅头一瓶伺候。 此帖于 Sep 20th, 2009 22:36 被 老景 编辑。 |
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Sep 20th, 2009, 22:45 | #3 |
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各位记着必须得押韵呵,美女的主要问题是没做湿的细胞,各位高人要帮她纠正哈
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真是高潮叠起哈,各位继续努力,后天就颁奖了。。。
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