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我觉得无论中文还是英文,凡是诗的语言,都是讲究凝练和节奏的。distance ,that加进去就很罗嗦了,没啥用处。像THAT这种累赘的连词,连现代商务英语都有尽量不要掉的趋势。况且,诗是不能简单用语法来分析的, 试想,如果你用中文语法去分析古诗或现代诗,那能行吗? 如:“小桥流水人家”,三个名词放在一起,符合什么语法呀? |
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Easy................. buddy
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002 is hiding somewhere crying and whining his heart is half broken his face is half covered with tears yet through the tear curtain the smartie finds the most powerful weapon tears tears..............and tears..... once the new weapon is in 002's hand LZ is gonna come to an end |
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