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旧 Jun 25th, 2010, 14:17   只看该作者   #21
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还是丰胸水平高,不负粉丝厚望!
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有道理,再想想。

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嘿嘿,锅盖就是“GOOODGUY”呀,不记得是谁先开始这么叫的了

这样一改就很好,很和谐了,不过“本平常”和“为名利”似乎还有点点差强人意
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旧 Jun 25th, 2010, 15:04   只看该作者   #22
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还是丰胸水平高,不负粉丝厚望!

不好意思,GOODGUY ,恕我愚笨,怎么就没想到“锅盖”之上顶着的是大名鼎鼎,博古通今,震烁环宇,不出手则已,出手就技惊四座的好先生呢。眼拙眼拙,万望请见谅。

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旧 Jun 25th, 2010, 15:24   只看该作者   #23
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呵呵,你这些话可真是震烁环宇。还是转送给俺的偶像丰胸(疯狂搜底)先生,我早想表扬表扬他了,都找不到词汇。
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不好意思,GOODGUY ,恕我愚笨,怎么就没想到“锅盖”之上顶着的是大名鼎鼎,博古通今,震烁环宇,不出手则已,出手就技惊四座的好先生呢。眼拙眼拙,万望请见谅。
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旧 Jun 25th, 2010, 16:20   只看该作者   #24
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嘿嘿,锅盖就是“GOOODGUY”呀,不记得是谁先开始这么叫的了



这样一改就很好,很和谐了,不过“本平常”和“为名利”似乎还有点点差强人意
缘聚缘散本平常,无须刻意
人来人往皆非凡,只因执着

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旧 Jun 25th, 2010, 16:34   只看该作者   #25
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呵呵,你这些话可真是震烁环宇。还是转送给俺的偶像丰胸(疯狂搜底)先生,我早想表扬表扬他了,都找不到词汇。
幸亏我平时修炼了点定力,不然还不得乐得吐了血。
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还是丰胸水平高,不负粉丝厚望!

应该说“还是丰胸高,睡平不负粉丝后望。“
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缘聚缘散本平常,无须刻意
人来人往皆非凡,只因执着
非凡对仗平常,工整,
非凡后接执着,意深。

妙!

那些飘扬GOODGUY的话,同样适用于搜底社长啦。
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恭喜社长,终于修炼成功了,现在上下联看起来都很圆满

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恭喜社长,终于修炼成功了,现在上下联看起来都很圆满
同喜,同喜!
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缘生缘灭本平常,无须刻意

人往人来向六道,何不回头

缘生缘灭平常事

祸起祸消塞上人


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原句:缘生缘灭本平常。平仄是这样的:平平平仄仄平平。作为上联,句尾一般应该是仄声。而且读起来也不上口。所以我改为了 平平平仄平平仄

下句代入典。当然大家都知道是《淮南子》的塞翁失马。平仄为:仄仄仄平仄仄平



每句的后四字,总统水平有限,接不上去了。一般对联分八言,九言,十言比较多。但十言一般是四六骈,前四后六。这十一言的,而且后四言的,我没经验,就感觉自己加不上去尾巴了。呵呵。
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祸起祸消塞上人


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原句:缘生缘灭本平常。平仄是这样的:平平平仄仄平平。作为上联,句尾一般应该是仄声。而且读起来也不上口。所以我改为了 平平平仄平平仄

下句代入典。当然大家都知道是《淮南子》的塞翁失马。平仄为:仄仄仄平仄仄平



每句的后...
这个解释很专业,学习了
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缘生缘灭平常事

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总统讲解:

原句:缘生缘灭本平常。平仄是这样的:平平平仄仄平平。作为上联,句尾一般应该是仄声。而且读起来也不上口。所以我改为了 平平平仄平平仄

下句代入典。当然大家都知道是《淮南子》的塞翁失马。平仄为:仄仄仄平仄仄平



每句的后...
受教受教,多谢总统费心讲解。后四个字确实很费思量啊。
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不错,意境对得很好,但有点不足。
“平常”是虚词,“塞”为实,“上”乃虚。不工,
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总统讲解:

原句:缘生缘灭本平常。平仄是这样的:平平平仄仄平平。作为上联,句尾一般应该是仄声。而且读起来也不上口。所以我改为了 平平平仄平平仄

下句代入典。当然大家都知道是《淮南子》的塞翁失马。平仄为:仄仄仄平仄仄平



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“平常”是虚词,“塞”为实,“上”乃虚。不工,
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