Jul 16th, 2005, 12:23 | #1 |
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peaceful, the water...
In the dawn I bike towards the beach. Stray along the beach, and try to undersand the breath of the morning.Bring the eyes to the limit far away, the peaceful water sits there.
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Jul 16th, 2005, 15:27 | 只看该作者 #2 | |
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I bike? or I ride? understood the breath? why? bring the eyes? "brought the view" should be better the water sit there? how? it has butt to sit? please use meaningful words to fit in your paragraphs. |
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未明,为明,为名,未名,威名
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