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读老吻的诗词有感
老吻的诗相当的有才华,朴素直爽,也不乏灵肉之合。 无题 谨把此“诗”献给老吻的小小护士 不用华丽的乐章,无需动人的节奏 似西部原野上飘来的浅吟 缠绕在身边 清浅幽幽 缱绻迷离 忘却了浮世花柳 一支素笔在指上摇曳 一抹红尘在心上曼舞 一句低唱带我走向不再青春的路上 一世浅吻我们却无语相向 ---大概完了 |
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无题(接上),顺口溜,转贴 仙人撑篙日当午 随风潜入红湿处 梨花两岸弄海棠 吹箫玉人醉幽谷 完 |
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哇,又有新作了,才思像涌泉喽。
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