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老景 · Jul 15th, 2010, 11:34

徐志摩原诗

最是那一低头的温柔，

像一朵水莲花不胜凉风的娇羞，

道一声珍重，道一声珍重，

那一声珍重里有甜蜜的忧愁——

沙扬娜拉！

网上已有翻译，我老嫌不好。。。再翻一下.

Most charming is the tender loving while bowing,

Like a lotus shying away from breezing,

said treasuring,said cherishing ,

in the farewell,that honey-sweet sadness is flowing.

Sayonara!

浪打浪 · Jul 15th, 2010, 15:33

被你翻译一下，诗意全无

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作者: hs002

徐志摩原诗

最是那一低头的温柔，

像一朵水莲花不胜凉风的娇羞，

道一声珍重，道一声珍重，

那一声珍重里有甜蜜的忧愁——

沙扬娜拉！

网上已有翻译，我老嫌不好。。。再翻一下.

Most enchanting is the tender loving in your gentl...

老景 · Jul 15th, 2010, 15:56

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作者: 浪打浪

被你翻译一下，诗意全无

这就是高手的境界啊

boyer · Jul 16th, 2010, 11:00

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作者: 浪打浪

被你翻译一下，诗意全无

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作者: hs002

这就是高手的境界啊

dryer, 去湿先锋

http://www.hometips.com/images/content/dryer_intro.gif

老景 · Jul 16th, 2010, 11:02

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作者: boyer

dryer, 去湿先锋

其实真觉得我老的翻译最好。。。

浪打浪 · Jul 16th, 2010, 11:07

二老不愧是DRYER---------一代吹湿手！

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作者: hs002

其实真觉得我老的翻译最好。。。

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作者: boyer

dryer, 去湿先锋

老景 · Jul 16th, 2010, 11:09

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作者: 浪打浪

二老不愧是DRYER---------一代吹湿手！

高啊！

原创吧？

浪打浪 · Jul 16th, 2010, 11:31

这东西能使转帖吗？
爱老要批判你罗嗦了。

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作者: hs002

高啊！

原创吧？

爱因思念 · Jul 16th, 2010, 11:32

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作者: 浪打浪

这东西能使转帖吗？
爱老要批判你罗嗦了。

这个贴本来可以很简洁回的,如下

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作者: hs002

高啊！

原创吧？

P!

浪打浪 · Jul 16th, 2010, 11:50

爱老说得好。不过，过分简洁也经常让人想入非非，害人不浅，，

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作者: 爱因思念

这个贴本来可以很简洁回的,如下
P!

这不，聪明的小二都给点明了

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作者: hs002

就算是个哑巴，男的，见了您爱老一准会说话，信不？

annarosa · Jul 18th, 2010, 02:00

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作者: 爱因思念

这个贴本来可以很简洁回的,如下

P!

老景 · Jul 24th, 2010, 14:20

I am tired of waiting
for the day you come over
I am tired of hoping
the moment I could hold you tighter
longing
for the kiss that never come along
thirsting
for pouring my bitterness and sweetness
that come from being alone
while I am not seeing
the light at the end of tunnel
shining the way you are heading
I am tired
of
being tired

笑熬漿糊 · Jul 24th, 2010, 20:27

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作者: hs002

I am tired of waiting
for the day you come over
I am tired of hoping
the moment I could hold you tighter
longing
for the kiss that never come alo...

寫給誰的？沒事兒問一句。

浪打浪 · Jul 25th, 2010, 22:16

老二，有人想你呢～～～～～～～～～～～
http://www.chinasmile.net/forums/sho...=469343&page=8

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作者: 媚眼如丝

呼叫海参002

浪打浪 · Jul 25th, 2010, 22:27

这首诗写得真好，原创吗？
the light at the end of tunnel is always there, you don't have to be hoping, longing, thirsting..............................just go and seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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作者: hs002

I am tired of waiting
for the day you come over
I am tired of hoping
the moment I could hold you tighter
longing
for the kiss that never come along
thirsting
for pouring my bitterness and sweetness
that come from being alone
while I am not seeing
the light at the end of tunnel
shining the way you are heading
I am tired
of
being tired...

老景 · Jul 26th, 2010, 11:24

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作者: 飞龙

寫給誰的？沒事兒問一句。

就您老吧

老景 · Jul 26th, 2010, 11:26

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作者: 浪打浪

这首诗写得真好，原创吗？
the light at the end of tunnel is always there, you don't have to be hoping, longing, thirsting..............................just go an...

闲来无事，有病呻吟尔。

难得老郭来捧，谢过。

陌上花开 · Jul 26th, 2010, 13:52

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作者: hs002

I am tired of waiting
for the day you come over
I am tired of hoping
the moment I could hold you tighter
longing
for the kiss that never come alo...

不错。

这么好的天气，您老还怎么如此多愁善感？

July. · Jul 26th, 2010, 14:18

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作者: hs002

I am tired of waiting
for the day you come over
I am tired of hoping
the moment I could hold you tighter
longing
for the kiss that never come alo...

倦了守候你来

厌了热望满怀

渴望你滴热吻

独尝甘苦倾心

清晨阳光未及唤醒我

你去无踪另偶很折磨

累字无力说

annarosa · Jul 26th, 2010, 16:05

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作者: July.

倦了守候你来

厌了热望满怀

渴望你滴热吻

独尝甘苦倾心

清晨阳光未及唤醒我

你去无踪另偶很折磨

累字无力说

请继续

Jul 15th, 2010, 11:34	只看该作者 #221
老景 Senior Member 注册日期: Dec 2008 帖子: 7,161	最是那一低头的温柔徐志摩原诗最是那一低头的温柔，像一朵水莲花不胜凉风的娇羞，道一声珍重，道一声珍重，那一声珍重里有甜蜜的忧愁—— 沙扬娜拉！网上已有翻译，我老嫌不好。。。再翻一下. Most charming is the tender loving while bowing, Like a lotus shying away from breezing, said treasuring,said cherishing , in the farewell,that honey-sweet sadness is flowing. Sayonara! 此帖于 Jul 20th, 2010 00:12 被老景编辑。原因: 简化忠于原作
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老景 Senior Member 注册日期: Dec 2008 帖子: 7,161 声望: 5824918	Being tired I am tired of waiting for the day you come over I am tired of hoping the moment I could hold you tighter longing for the kiss that never come along thirsting for pouring my bitterness and sweetness that come from being alone while I am not seeing the light at the end of tunnel shining the way you are heading I am tired of being tired
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