Oct 21st, 2004, 18:40 | 只看该作者 #55 |
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这种文章,蒙蒙国内的还可以
可以说,50%到70%是虚构的,当然,你可以说是艺术加工。我只想告诉大家一个事实,就是在这边,对于大部分公司来说,如果两个员工在工作的时候发生争吵,多半不会去仲裁谁对谁错,解决的办法就是把两个人都开除掉。所以一般是暗斗的多,明争的少。毕竟饭碗重要。所以我觉得楼主的发挥过于夸张了些。象楼主这种斗完这个又斗那个,结果最后还录用他为正式员工,就编得有点没普了。流水线不是什么高深的活,是个人就会做,快慢好坏差别都不会太大,更多是和别人的协调合作。不管你是什么理由,和人争来吵去的人,绝对不是一个好工人。 另外,文中的语言即使用汉语也不是那么容易说出口的,何况是用英文,所以人工编造的痕迹比较明显。对于国内的人,一般以为有了语言环境英语就说得呱呱叫,所以可以蒙一蒙,但在这里工作的人来说,尤其想我这种在工厂里打了几年滚的人来说,看着实在是别扭,忍不住就要说两句。 个人意见而已。 |
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Oct 21st, 2004, 23:37 | 只看该作者 #57 | |
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同意,老常是个好作家。
或者说,老常可以当个好作家。 引用:
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Oct 22nd, 2004, 00:04 | 只看该作者 #58 |
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Dear web friends, I appreciate your attention on this story, which is 100% true of my recent life experience. I was impressed by jndu's eagle like sharp eyes and lightening accounting capability, which turned me into a labor superman who worked 25 hours a day (I am also wondering where this extra hour comes from). My thanks go to ilovevan and john_xu for their effort to drag jndu back to reality. For those who are dubious of the authenticity of the conversations inside, I convince you they are all real stuff. As a once university English speaking competition champion, I can command far more difficult topics than those. I don't agree with 细胞's high opinion that I wrote this story to only cheat the countrymen never been outside China. The impulse of my writing it is based on the joys of the unexpected win over the struggle. Also it is my gladness to share my story to the immigrants on the web, listen to their response and exchange inspirations. I agree with 细胞's observation that usually both parties would be fired if fighting on site, yet life is stranger than fiction. I WAS really hired and that guy WAS really fired in two days time. If 细胞’s conclusion "the guy who always fight with co-workers is absolutely not a good worker" is absolutely right, I should be the last person on the employment list. I don't mind others enjoy their existence by swallowing humiliation when bullied and also I don't boost blind and unnecessary bravery. It is just my personal preference to force the bullyboys to eat back their own shit. Quote Martin Luther King's famous words here: a man can't ride your back unless it is bent. How can you expect the ignorance and belittling surrounding us would vanish if we Chinese immigrants don't show our bravery and determination when looked down? Thanks, 猎户老常 |
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