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旧 Oct 23rd, 2012, 16:02     #1
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默认 下雪了,鞋湿了。

当年东坡效欧阳体作雪诗,不用“盐、玉、鹤、鹭、絮、蝶、飞、舞、皓、白、洁、素”等字,


“老僧斫路出门去,
寒液满鼻清淋漓。
洒袍入袖湿靴底,
亦有执板上阶(土犀)“。


要不咱们也学着古人来来这“雪诗“,反正雪正下的紧,闲着也是闲着。

春雪社博客:
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春雪,伴着古典清新的琴韵,扑面而来......
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一片两片三五片
飞来飞去真讨厌
胡吃烂睡真可怜
减肥减肥可咋办
不带“飞”的。
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此和尚出门,下雪了,着凉了,流鼻涕了,鞋也湿了,想什么呢?


冰魂雪魄意难描,
绒羽轻云落九霄。
万丈红尘一时净,
风清老衲自逍遥。



冰绒雪魄落红尘,
九霄万丈意轻云。
衲老风清时自净,
难描一羽逍遥魂。

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一朵两朵窗前开
花落空中随风飘
雨雪霏霏梦一夜
茉莉芬芳进万家

朵朵压枝窗外发,
风寒香冷落凝花。
霏霏夜雪入诗梦,
茉莉芬芳飘万家。

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人家贼哥是开始SB小镇贵族身份了。 跟你不一样。你是石油城大哼
小老板 大老板 眼里不该没有老板
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冰绒雪魄落红尘,
九霄万丈意轻云。
衲老风清时自净,
难描一羽逍遥魂。
万羽一时描雪魂,
九霄轻落净红尘。
自清绒衲意难老,
冰魄逍遥丈风云。
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呔,大胆,竟敢把偶的字重新排列组合,重现另一种超然境界,不是你的啊,全是偶的!
让我想起了儿童动画片《渔童》里的台词:“可怜的老头,鱼盆是我的。“

其实文字就像是一块块积木,本来就可以搬来搬去的,同样的一些积木可以搭建出不同风格的建筑。

我就像是借了你的积木,搭建了不同的建筑,然后再还给你。

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呔,大胆,竟敢把偶的字重新排列组合,重现另一种超然境界,不是你的啊,全是偶的!
是因为对你的诗喜欢的紧,所以才敢造词。。。。。。,不过,平心而论,都没有你的原作所表达出的那种自然酣畅的感觉,差得不是一点半点,是很多点,连成线,组成面,最后布满了整个虚空。“周虚空,遍法界。“

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红尘雾中近看花,
细心揣摩不思家;
寒意四起狐裘冷;
不依不绕境入遐。
好诗!
喜欢。
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都是意境中人,惺惺相惜。嗨,这年头,怕是有人要歪解了。
脚正不怕楼歪。我一无影脚给他踹正了。
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