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旧 Oct 17th, 2017, 17:59     #1
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默认 请朋友们作诗

昨夜偶得一句“月来人闲静”,觉得很有王维的味道,请诗友们以此为首句作诗如何?我先粗粗的写一首以抛砖引玉了。


月来人闲静

听花睡意无

好景难辜负

一醉又何如

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月来人闲静,
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月来人闲静
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老干部的诗不仅有功力,且暗含哲理。佩服!

月来人闲静
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小景老师的诗越来越透着大气了!回你一首《梦潜东篱》

月来人静闲
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喜欢小景的〖阶前夜露生
疯大师的〖星落远天寒〗〖月去静闲人
楚老师的〖月来人闲静〗〖遥遥水生烟



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月来人闲静, 。。。

好难, 再想想/。。。。。。
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都好美,你们怎么不出诗集呢。如果出,会收藏一本,常常品味。

也特别期待小景专辑。

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黛玉怜花惜花,
楚大师知花护花,
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等待,继续。。

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山间漫步
寂寞如影随形
月色穿透树叶
有些凉意,有些熟悉
无数次重复着迷茫
望着远处的山峦
依稀是当初相遇的模样
突然回首
寻觅来时的路
灵魂似乎丢落到了某处
那是间小屋
有本书
有杯茶
有一把锄头
有个倩影
灯火阑珊
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虚拟一下楚老师的诗意~~


如影寂,月透枝,
迟迟魂梦,无复寄相思,
故道茫茫忆旧时。

小屋孤,茶烟疲,
峦山远远,独落珊阑意。。
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虚拟一下楚老师的诗意~~


如影寂,月透枝,
迟迟魂梦,无复寄相思,
故道茫茫忆旧时。

小屋孤,茶烟疲,
峦山远远,独落珊阑意。。
。。。。。


解读的真好!我借你的意境再回你一首。

孤山月透枝
相思无所寄
小屋茶烟缈
可解阑珊意
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倒数第二个字出了

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