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旧 Dec 12th, 2004, 12:19   只看该作者   #21
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本人对COVER LETTER的一点体会!

1。看了很多鬼佬的简历,他们的COVER LETTER多是两句话而已:
Enclosed is my resume for the office help position.
My salary expectancy is from $28,000 - $30,000.00.

2。我最近的体会是,在COVER LETER里,用BULLET的形式简要列出自己对该职位的优势!
似乎这样的COVER LETTER很受用,发出两封,都获得了面试机会!

COVER LETTER就是要简明扼要!写太长了,让人看了半天,还没找到主题,那只有被扔进垃圾桶的份儿了!
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旧 Dec 12th, 2004, 20:46   只看该作者   #22
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本人对COVER LETTER的一点体会!

1。看了很多鬼佬的简历,他们的COVER LETTER多是两句话而已:
Enclosed is my resume for the office help position.
My salary expectancy is from $28,000 - $30,000.00.

2。我最近的体会是,在COVER LETER里,用BULLET的形式简要列出自己对该职位的优势!
似乎这样的COVER LETTER很受用,发出两封,都获得了面试机会!

COVER LETTER就是要简明扼要!写太长了,让人看了半天,还没找到主题,那只有被扔进垃圾桶的份儿了!
最后一点, 我很认同, 30秒内如果引不起HR的兴趣, 那就完了。


越过辽阔天空啦……飞向遥远群星
善良勇敢的啦……铁臂阿童木
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旧 Dec 12th, 2004, 22:44   只看该作者   #23
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旧 Dec 17th, 2004, 17:03   只看该作者   #24
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旧 Dec 19th, 2004, 04:24   只看该作者   #25
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旧 Dec 19th, 2004, 07:11   只看该作者   #26
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阿童木,不仅要给你顶一顶,还要再多点几个小绿点给你。哈......

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旧 Dec 19th, 2004, 07:19   只看该作者   #27
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旧 Dec 30th, 2004, 01:20   只看该作者   #28
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Financial Analyst Resume

Dr. Jekyll
1450 Mockingbird Way
Baltimore, MD 20804
410-555-5555
OBJECTIVE:A position that enables me to use my financial analysis and project management skills

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Investment Analysis Intern, 2001 - Present
OP Investments Inc., Washington, D.C.


Analyze financial performance of private equity fund holdings in Asia and Eastern Europe

Execute credit and financial analyses of sub-project equity investments across various sectors

Produce annual credit reviews of funds and conduct financial agreement compliance reviews of funds

Evaluate business plans' viability, capital structure, and compliance with U.S. statuary requirements

Structured new project/corporate finance deals with capitalization of $100,000 to $100 million in agriculture, health insurance, IT and telecom
Produced IT/telecom marketing plan to expand brand awareness and market penetration of OPII products

Develop rapport with clients interested in investment opportunities in emerging markets, including Africa, the Caribbean, the Middle East, the Pacific Islands, and Southeastern Europe



Research Consultant, 1999 - 2001
Hyde & Co., Washington, D.C.

Expanded firm's product line by developing marketing research report on U.S. Hispanic market
Assembled economic and demographic data into consumer demand/market penetration model
Co-authored final report focusing on top 10 urban markets for Hispanics



Business Advisor/Project Manager, 1996 - 1998
Internation Agricultural Preservation Foundation, Holland, The Netherlands

Assisted with project planning and budgeting for organization sponsored by European Union

Formulated strategic model to monitor and evaluate fruit commodities and tree survival rates

Spearheaded agricultural technology proposal that was awarded $40,000 from Japanese Embassy Fund

Improved project results by making modifications that increased tree survival rates by 20 percent


EDUCATION
MBA degree candidate, June 2002, Ghoul University

Selected Coursework: Statistics, Finance, Marketing, Organizational behavior, Accounting

Bachelor of Arts, Sociology and Communication, Stevenson School of Communications, Ghoul University

REFERENCES
Available upon request
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旧 Dec 30th, 2004, 12:42   只看该作者   #29
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请教阿童木一个很弱的问题,见笑了^_^:
Cover letter 的内容是打印在信封上呢还是封在信封里的一页纸呢?
如果用E-mail发简历的话,怎么处理cover letter?
谢谢!
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旧 Dec 30th, 2004, 22:19   只看该作者   #30
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请教阿童木一个很弱的问题,见笑了^_^:
Cover letter 的内容是打印在信封上呢还是封在信封里的一页纸呢?

信封里的第一页纸, 你打印在信封上邮递员叔叔阿姨就不高兴了

如果用E-mail发简历的话,怎么处理cover letter?

放在邮件正文栏内

谢谢!

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旧 Jan 4th, 2005, 21:09   只看该作者   #31
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用力顶!
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旧 Jan 10th, 2005, 20:20   只看该作者   #32
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请教阿童木一个很弱的问题,见笑了^_^:
Cover letter 的内容是打印在信封上呢还是封在信封里的一页纸呢?
如果用E-mail发简历的话,怎么处理cover letter?
谢谢!
我也想知道!
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旧 Feb 3rd, 2005, 20:43   只看该作者   #33
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旧 Feb 21st, 2005, 18:49   只看该作者   #34
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请教阿童, 在一些找工作网站上要求post的cover letter,应该怎么写啊?把resume上的highlight搬上去行吗?有没有例子? 多谢!
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旧 Apr 7th, 2005, 01:04   只看该作者   #35
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我最近的体会是,在COVER LETER里,用BULLET的形式简要列出自己对该职位的优势!


请问BULLET形式是什么?孤陋寡闻,见笑.
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我最近的体会是,在COVER LETER里,用BULLET的形式简要列出自己对该职位的优势!


请问BULLET形式是什么?孤陋寡闻,见笑.

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