偶的e-mail稿，发动老外同事、朋友通过加拿大红十字会捐款

[tulipa]

Please Help - Online donation to raise funds for Earthquake Devastated China



Dear All,

A deadly earthquake measured grade 7.9 Richter scale suddenly happened in Sichuan Province, China on the 12th of May, at 2PM local time. More than 12,000 people have been killed up to now and the number is still rising because at least 94,000 people have been buried under collapsed buildings. The quake can be felt as far as in Thailand and Taiwan. The disaster damaged the road accesses to the hardest hit counties which makes the rescue extremely hard.

There are many things that we can learn from this terrible event, but first the Red Cross needs our assistance to rescue the survivors, and this takes money. We can all help by donating money now. It does not take a lot to have a positive impact.

Please help them. It is a desperate fight against time to save more lives. Your help means a lot to the families who had just lost their beloved ones, to the survivors who had just seen lives vanished beside them, and to the volunteers who are now overcoming mountains and dashing to the earthquake site.

Canadian Red Cross is now accepting online donation to help China. It’s simple to donate online (https://www.paypaq.com/redcross/new/index.php) with a credit card or call 1-800-418-1111 to donate over the phone.
For the Fund Designation, please select “China Earthquake”.

Thank you, everyone, for your understanding, for your care, and for your help.

Sincerely,

[tulipa]

偶英语不好这个是别处抄来的，英语好的来给润润色，尽可能多的发出去吧。

不能回去切实做点什么那就能做一点算一点吧……

[oldguyintown]

写得很好。稍微改了一下这两句：

Please help those people who survived from the deadly earthquake, they need food, water, clothes and medication.
Please help those lives who are still buried under collapsed buildings, they need your support;

[coolke]

加拿大转给中国的时候肯定会说是他们的红十字筹集到多少多少，结果其中好多咱的钱。

[tulipa]

作者: coolke

加拿大转给中国的时候肯定会说是他们的红十字筹集到多少多少，结果其中好多咱的钱。...

这个不重要吧，也不都是我们的钱，也有加拿大人民的嘛。偶这不就是希望呼吁尽可能多的加拿大人民献爱心呢嘛。西方国家的民众最不缺乏这个的

[coolke]

作者: tulipa

这个不重要吧，也不都是我们的钱，也有加拿大人民的嘛。偶这不就是希望呼吁尽可能多的加拿大人民献爱心呢嘛。西方国家的民众最不缺乏这个的

谢谢你的英文信，请忽视我帖子的存在。

[笑话]

thanks. I send it to other people.

[ling]

我已把它打印下来了,准备贴到单位去.

[风雨兼程]

I did !

God bless you!

[tulipa]

作者: ling

我已把它打印下来了,准备贴到单位去.

贴单位用另外一个版本吧，就是11"x17"那个

[ditto]

这个poster的用词需要推敲一下。我把这个发给我们的Chair看，希望他能以官方的名义发给所有人，他建议修改一下用词，说原文pleading的口气太重，并有些语法错误，他给修改了一下，并发给全体教职员工和学生，估计能有2000人收到这个电子邮件。我贴在这里，供大家参考。如果谁有时间把pdf的poster给修改一下就更好了。一点意见，仅供参考。

Dear All,

A deadly earthquake measured grade 7.9 Richter scale suddenly happened in Sichuan Province, China on the 12th of May, at 2PM local time. More than 12,000 people have been killed up to now and the number is still rising because at least 94,000 people have been buried under collapsed buildings. The quake can be felt as far as in Thailand and Taiwan. The disaster damaged the road accesses to the hardest hit counties which makes the rescue extremely hard.

There are many things that we can learn from this terrible event, but first the Red Cross needs our assistance to rescue the survivors, and this takes money. We can all help by donating money now. It does not take a lot to have a positive impact.

Please help them. It is a desperate fight against time to save more lives. Your help means a lot to the families who had just lost their beloved ones, to the survivors who had just seen lives vanished beside them, and to the volunteers who are now overcoming mountains and dashing to the earthquake site.

Canadian Red Cross is now accepting online donation to help China. It’s simple to donate online (https://www.paypaq.com/redcross/new/index.php) with a credit card or call 1-800-418-1111 to donate over the phone.
For the Fund Designation, please select “China Earthquake”.

Thank you, everyone, for your understanding, for your care, and for your help.

Sincerely,

[tulipa]

谢谢！改了顶楼

[wrlomm]

作者: ditto

这个poster的用词需要推敲一下。我把这个发给我们的Chair看，希望他能以官方的名义发给所有人，他建议修改一下用词，说原文pleading的口气太重，并有些语法错误，他给修改了一下，并发给全体教职员工和学生，估计能有2000人收到这个电子邮件。我贴在这里，供大家参考。如果谁有时间把pdf的pos...

谢谢！这个有用

[didio]

觉得太啰嗦乐，改了一下
All,
As some of you may already know, A deadly earthquake measured grade 7.9 Richter scale struck Sichuan Province in China on Monday. The earthquake, felt as far away as Pakistan, Thailand and Vietnam. More than 12,000 people have been confirmed dead and 94,000 people are missing. The death toll is rising every minute.

Two ways you can help
Pray for children and families who have been affected by this deadly earthquake.
Donate now to help provide relief for survivors of the earthquake.

Canadian Red Cross is now accepting online donation..
https://www.paypaq.com/redcross/new/index.php
select “China Earthquake”.

Your contribution will help Canadian Red Cross aid to children and families devastated by this disaster.

Thanks.

[bono]

写的很好！

有一个建议。文中的链接和电话能否改成加拿大红十字会的官方网站。从那里，可以选择online donation.这样可以增加可信度？

[tulipa]

那个连接就是官网进去选了online donation出来的，电话也是对的，加了官网在信里

[gemini0]

不是所有捐给加拿大红十字会的钱都转到中国。请通过中国或香港的红十字会捐款。

http://www.chinasmile.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=344918

谢谢大家的爱心！

[movingsales]

Dear All,

A deadly earthquake measured grade 7.9 Richter scale suddenly happened in Sichuan Province, China on the 12th of May, at 2PM local time. More than 12,000 people have been killed up to now and the number is still rising because at least 94,000 people have been buried under collapsed buildings. The quake can be felt as far as in Thailand and Taiwan. The disaster damaged the road accesses to the hardest hit counties which makes the rescue extremely hard.

It is a desperate fight against time to save more lives. Your help means a lot to those lives who are still buried under collapsed buildings, to those who survived but lack food, water, and medication, and to the volunteers who are now overcoming mountains and dashing to the earthquake site.

It does not take a lot to have a positive impact. Canadian Red Cross is now accepting online donation to help China. It’s simple to donate online (https://www.paypaq.com/redcross/new/index.php) with a credit card or call 1-800-418-1111 to donate over the phone.
For the Fund Designation, please select “China Earthquake”.

Thank you, everyone, for your understanding, for your care, and for your help.

Sincerely,

[快乐的男人]

已转发到我办公室的每一个人了.

[闲人.]

这英文写的可是够中国味儿的。直接从中文翻译过来的吧。